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Fear.
Your stomach's in knots,
Your forehead turns hot,
All good things forgot
In the back of your mind.

Courage.
You breathe in your Hell
You wait for the bell,
And you'll wait until,
You run into the fire.

Fear
I'm afraid of
Courage
I'm not afraid of
Fear
I'm afraid of
You...

Fear.
Your voice choking off,
You sputter and cough,
Their eyes will scoff
At your lack of feeling.

Courage.
Your heartstrings explode,
You lift off the load,
At the end of the road
There's no way you're leaving

Courage
I'm afraid of
Fear
I'm not afraid of
Courage
I'm afraid of
Me...
I needed to write this, as I've been rather ballsy lately.
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MissFluffyPantss Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
Ha, I found it xD
As usual,
LOVE. LET ME HAVE BABIES WITH THIS THING.
i mean i like it :'D
AND I NEED TO SEE YOU AGAIN. GAH.
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student General Artist
I NEED TO SEE YOU TOO> GAH.
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MissFluffyPantss Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
FFFFF
oh and thank you for the favorite :3
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student General Artist
YOU'RE WELCOME!!
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SketchingInTheRain Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This one is really interesting. :) I love it~
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you, Yasmine-lady!
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SketchingInTheRain Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome, Sir Natalie! XDD
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Student General Artist
OH bbygrl. U str8?
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SketchingInTheRain Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yis ah am.
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Student General Artist
OOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO!
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SketchingInTheRain Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconharharplz:
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Student General Artist
WHEEEE
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PassionXxLina Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
This is really well done.
Love this quintet "Courage.
Your heartstrings explode,
You lift off the load,
At the end of the road
There's no way you're leaving"

And also I like how each negation is a definition of either Fear or Courage :D Like "Courage - I'm afraid of Fear" and then "Fear - I'm afraid of Courage" and they just tie in with each other from line to line.
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student General Artist
This wins the best comment ever award!
Just so you know. :)
Thank you so much for the detail of your comment, and for the favorite as well.
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PassionXxLina Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Yay! :winner: hahaha.
You're welcome ^^
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha, I love that. :)
:D
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nyankage Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
aww bro. D: that's so cool
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh my God!! Thank you!! And for the favorite!!
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nyankage Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
no prob bro :D :iconiloveyouplz:
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student General Artist
SERIOUSLY?
YOU WATCHED ME!!
ALL OF MY JOY.
ALL OF IT!!
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nyankage Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Well, of course ^-^ i like looking at writings and poetry, bro. XD it's very beautiful.
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you. Thank you.
Thank you. Thank you.
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nyankage Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Welcome :D
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student General Artist
:D
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rachel-whatsername Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
So amazing !! Seriously!!
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much!
That means mountains to me. :) :heart:
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rachel-whatsername Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
No problem! :) you're really talented at writing though lol
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you, thank you, thank you.
For the favorite as well.
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rachel-whatsername Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
No problem! :)
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Natafin Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student General Artist
:3
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